Windows 10

Aug 30, 2015 10:44
Yesterday, I updated the OS of my computer to Windows 10.

So far, there is no trouble.

My favorite function of Windows 10 is virtual desktops.

This is a general function for Linux and Mac OS, but finally it was implemented to Windows as well.

The virtual desktops are really useful when you conduct several tasks in parallel.

Also, anti-aliasing were applied to texts in whole, so it became a little clean and easy to read.
昨日、パソコンを Windows 10 にアップデートしました。

現在のところ、特に不具合はありません。

一番気に入っているのは、仮想デスクトップの機能です。

Linux や Mac では以前からある機能ですが、ようやく Windows にも搭載されました。

複数の作業をするときに、とても便利です。

また、全体的に文字にアンチエイリアスがかかり、少し綺麗になりました。
No. 1 bananacreamtau's correction
  • Windows 10
  • Windows 10
  • Yesterday, I updated the OS of my computer to Windows 10.
  • Yesterday, I updated the OS of my computer to Windows 10.
  • So far, there is no trouble.
  • So far, there is no trouble.
  • My favorite function of Windows 10 is virtual desktops.
  • My favorite function of Windows 10 is virtual desktops.
  • This is a general function for Linux and Mac OS, but finally it was implemented to Windows as well.
  • This is a general function for Linux and Mac OS, but finally it was implemented to Windows as well.
  • The virtual desktops are really useful when you conduct several tasks in parallel.
  • The virtual desktops are really useful when you conduct several tasks in parallel.
  • Also, anti-aliasing were applied to texts in whole, so it became a little clean and easy to read.
  • Also, anti-aliasing were applied to texts in whole, so it became a little cleaner and easier to read.
This was well-written! I am debating whether or not to update to Windows 10.
あらた
If you're on windows 8, you really should. If you're on 7, you might want to wait a bit. Some features like VPN, virtual machines, bluetooth, and touchpad controls have outdated drivers. If you're not using any of those features, I'd personally recommend upgrading. You get the cool metro styled applications in windowed mode and new features like the one kanotown described. There's also cortana, which may be a plus or minus depending on your stance on virtual assistants.
bananacreamtau
Thanks for the advice!
kanotown
Thank you so much for correcting my post!
I'm happy about your words. :)
And あらたさん, I learned something new, thank you. :)
No. 2 あらた's correction
  • So far, there is no trouble.
  • So far, there wereis no troubles.
  • My favorite function of Windows 10 is virtual desktops.
  • My favorite function of Windows 10 is the virtual desktops.
  • This is a general function for Linux and Mac OS, but finally it was implemented to Windows as well.
  • This wais already implgemneral functedion for Linux and Mac OS, but and finally it iwas implemented ftor Windows as well.
  • The virtual desktops are really useful when you conduct several tasks in parallel.
  • VThe virtual desktops are really useful when you want conduct several tasks simultan paralleously.
  • Also, anti-aliasing were applied to texts in whole, so it became a little clean and easy to read.
  • Also, anti-aliasing wereas applied to texts in whole, so it became a little cleaner and easyier to read.
I updated too and I've noticed nothing too glitchy . I don't use multiple screens so I don't see it as a plus for windows 10.
あらた
Sorry, I'm on my phone, so the format looks weird :(
kanotown
Thank you so much for correcting me! :)
It's not a problem! Now, I completely understand the reason why some people use such formats, haha.
No. 3 ラッテ・エクレア's correction
  • Yesterday, I updated the OS of my computer to Windows 10.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • So far, there is no trouble.
  • So far, there is no trouble.
     そんな方がいいです。でも「No trouble so far 」の方が「So far, there is no trouble.」よりもっと通常です。
  • My favorite function of Windows 10 is virtual desktops.
  • My favorite function of Windows 10 is its virtual desktops.
     its (possesive noun)を使えでは仮想デスクトップがW10の特徴の事が話せます。
  • This is a general function for Linux and Mac OS, but finally it was implemented to Windows as well.
  • This was originally found on Linux and Mac OSes, but with Windows 10 now it can also be found on Windows platforms as well.
  • The virtual desktops are really useful when you conduct several tasks in parallel.
  • The virtual desktops are really useful especially if you want to conduct several tasks at the same time/multitask.
  • Also, anti-aliasing were applied to texts in whole, so it became a little clean and easy to read.
  • Also, anti-aliasing was applied to texts in whole, so it became a little cleaner and easy to read compared to previous versions.
アップデートしたいですが、W10はゲーム出来ますかな。
kanotown
Thank you very much for correcting my post! :D
Windows 7や8で動くゲームの大半は、Windows 10でも動くようです。
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